Hello everyone! I'd like to know if the characters are well-written, whether I'm successful in blending specific niche genres (like sports, an evil protagonist, mafia, and psychological thriller with violence), and whether my story might, in a neutral sense, become memorable. Before reading, I warn you once again: the content contains detailed violence, rape, murder, and other shock content, not to mention the protagonist breaking every possible taboo. I'm not sure if anyone will read the story, but if someone does decide to, I hope you've read the warnings twice:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2026092/bloody-ball/
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2026092/bloody-ball/