Review swarp

[Zenomew]

It's pretty simple I read your story and you read mine and we both give constructive criticism on our respective stories

Anything except BL is allowed

Tenkan book 1 The Twins of Time

If you had all the time in the world Do you still want to live a normal life? Do you feel like since I have superpowers I don't need to work and do other boring stuff like homework I would suggest dropping this story and pretend that you never saw...

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