Review Swaps/Feedback anyone

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

It's been chaotic to say the least. Anyone up for feedback/review swaps I'm game. On your end if you could kindly go over just the prologue + 4 chapters (less if you feel its not your cup of tea), that should be enough for a proper sniff test.

PS: Much obliged.

Son of the Sun

Waking up in a ditch with no memory of who he is or how he got there, Solen embarks on a perilous journey to piece together his shattered past. As he navigates through old and new challenges, he discovers that some truths are best left forgotten. “For if you gaze...

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[Hans.Trondheim]

I think @PBJ_Time is always up for one.

Mine is too long to be considered for a review after four chapters.

Edit: forgot to tell you to link your story here as well, so the lazy peeps can take a peek.

 

[PBJ_Time]

It's been chaotic to say the least. Anyone up for feedback/review swaps I'm game. On your end if you could kindly go over just the prologue + 4 chapters (less if you feel its not your cup of tea), that should be enough for a proper sniff test.

PS: Much obliged.

Sure thing, fam. I'll get into your story after I cook lunch for my family and I, so please let me know what you think about my story for the time being.

Beware the Horde [Isekai LitRPG]

New chapters every MWF, 8:00 PM EST. Also available on Royal Road. *** ~Too raw to live, too far to die.~ MMA fanatic and local champion Hajime Kato once thought the world was his oyster. Now, after his untimely death, he gets thrown into a new reality dominated by a game screen...

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[HellsPerfectSpawn]

I'll get to it. I don't binge read anything though. I like to take my time.

 

[Zenomew]

Here is mine

Storyteller bringing manga to another world

All she knows is that this alternate world is too stiff and boring with no imagination or wonder or manga As a storyteller she has her duty to bring stories to this dull world no matter the cost

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