Revamped Series

[Abyss.organ]

I just made a revamped series of a previous story of mine. Although it wasn't popular at all, I'm hoping it could surpass its predecessor. The previous series had a muddy storyline so I made sure to plan the successor's storyline and characters. Anyway, I have a question. How's the writing in my first chapter? Is it smooth and easy to follow? Is it too sudden and unrelated? Is it, overall, hard to read? I'm more worried about these factors more than anything.

 

[Toomanysorrows]

Yeah unfortunately the first chapter doesn't seem to have any text. Maybe something went wrong with uploading?

 

[LostLibrarian]

Yeah unfortunately the first chapter doesn't seem to have any text. Maybe something went wrong with uploading?

He picked white as color for the font.
So if you have the standard design and not the dark version, you have white text on white background and only see it when you select the text

 

[Abyss.organ]

Yeah unfortunately the first chapter doesn't seem to have any text. Maybe something went wrong with uploading?

I think people who use light mode are bastards, but that's just me being jealous they can do that.

The font problem's been fixed already.

 

[Ral]

Now you have black on dark grey when using the dark theme. You should not have messed with the font colors.

 

[Abyss.organ]

Now you have black on dark grey when using the dark theme. You should not have messed with the font colors.

What black?

 

[Ral]

What black?

Black text on dark grey background.

But you already know. You have changed it. So why pretend to be ignorant?

 

[Abyss.organ]

Black text on dark grey background.

But you already know. You have changed it. So why pretend to be ignorant?

For supposed comedic effect. It clearly didn't strike you so don't worry about it.

 

[LazyPanda]

Best way to be able to have the text be seen by both Light and Dark version is to clear the format on the text. Standard text would be show visible to both.

 

[Ral]

For supposed comedic effect. It clearly didn't strike you so don't worry about it.

What comedic? (And yes, I'm trying the same humor as when you ask what black.)

But seriously, you shouldn't have done anything with the text. It will automatically turn light or dark depending on the theme.

 

[Abyss.organ]

What comedic? (And yes, I'm trying the same humor as when you ask what black.)

But seriously, you shouldn't have done anything with the text. It will automatically turn light or dark depending on the theme.

I figured that out after I released my second chapter. I've had atleast two people tell me that my chapters were practically empty beforehand.

 

[Ral]

I figured that out after I released my second chapter. I've had atleast two people tell me that my chapters were practically empty beforehand.

I know but my post was the opposite problem. While they tell you that the white text was invincible in the Light Theme (I saw that and didn't comment because people already told you). Mine was how turning it black make it barely readable in Dark Theme.

And there is still an issue now, but it seems you don't want to hear them, so, I'll let you figure it out yourself.