larareispoetry
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As the title said, I revamped my whole novel this afternoon and still working on the future chapters to post. So I increased the wording from 1K to 1.5K and would love to hear some criticism, especially from other novel authors. Just to understand if I'm on the right path.
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The Chainbreaker
A young girl with strange blue blood is living with two faeries aunts. Olvia shows talent as a fantastic battlemage. Growing unknowing, hidden from the dangers of a King that has the power to summon and enslave her. Only her 'Chainbreaker', with the aid of old and new friends, can...