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ImaMelonFarm

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A while ago, I decided to write my first story... but I was in a dilemma... should I write a fanfiction, or an original work?
Then I thought... why not both? And hence, this abomination was created xd


Please give some feedback on the existing chapters, I'll try to improve myself as much as I can :3
 
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