Request feedback and general advice

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

Greetings, I request feedback and general advice for a beginner effort from yours truly.

Any help/guidance will also be very appreciated.

Son of the Sun

Waking up in a ditch with no memory of who he is or how he got there, Solen embarks on a perilous journey to piece together his shattered past. As he navigates through old and new challenges, he discovers that some truths are best left forgotten. “For if you gaze...

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[HellsPerfectSpawn]

Aww no one, well that's disappointing.

 

[greyblob]

Aww no one, well that's disappointing.

check the active feedback threads

 

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

check the active feedback threads

Sure thing
After searching a bit it actually seems very hard to judge which threads are actually open