velwoven
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Hey, guys,
I'm Vel, a new guy here on Scribble Hub. This is the link to my book:
www.scribblehub.com
I like to joke that my universe is a pot of BDSM. As in, Buddhism, Daoism, Sex, and Mechanics. Though there is also actual BDSM scenes planned in the near future. Jokes aside, I'm ultimately writing for hobbies/self-actualization, so prioritizing fun is important. Certainly think fun should extend to my readers, too. So if for any reason they're not having as much fun reading my story as I'm writing it, then I'd love to know how I can do it better.
In exchange, I'd love to read your book (especially if it's got substantial worldbuilding, Game-Of-Thrones-like scale, or smut!) and be your pen pal.
Most of my favorite books on SH have smut in them, so to me the last element is...probably more important than I'd admit.
Things I'd like feedback on:
1. Is the story something you can see yourself coming back to every week or so?
Like, if this was a weekly TV show, would you stay tuned and check back to see what the characters are up to next?
2. The smut. Is it good? Does it make you curious about the plot/world/character?
Yeah, serious question. I too prefer touching smut over gratuitous ones. I do love writing/reading smut. Probably too much sometimes.
3. Does reading the story make you feel good or drained?
I've been loving SH's 'Glossary' feature, though I get many readers probably don't check those out? Funny thing about my universe is that there really is a host of 100+ characters, dozens of locations/planets/moons/star systems, and over a hundred different items to loot/collect in the backlog. There's a link in my book's blurb that'll take you to its official site (built by me) and you'll see the sheer amount of...stuffs it has.
After studying my old book's flaws, I'm drip feeding things and doing what I feel necessary to keep it manageable for the reader's benefit this time. The story remains multi POV, though, and conflicts/highly stressful moments remain in the plot. Nonetheless, I'm curious whether this story is now something that someone can happily enjoy after a long day at work.
Just as a general remark, you're welcome to praise or roast anything in my book.
Thanks, and I look forward to your responses!
I'm Vel, a new guy here on Scribble Hub. This is the link to my book:
Nucleus: Dreams & Desires [Mature/Action/Romance/Smut]
In 2295 Mars, Sigrun Fjeld has survived through sex, violence and dissociation: killing monsters by day, selling her body by night, all while chasing the ghost of Ivar, the man who sacrificed everything to save her. Her mental focus has dropped to bottom. Her heart is armored in ice. She can...
I like to joke that my universe is a pot of BDSM. As in, Buddhism, Daoism, Sex, and Mechanics. Though there is also actual BDSM scenes planned in the near future. Jokes aside, I'm ultimately writing for hobbies/self-actualization, so prioritizing fun is important. Certainly think fun should extend to my readers, too. So if for any reason they're not having as much fun reading my story as I'm writing it, then I'd love to know how I can do it better.
In exchange, I'd love to read your book (especially if it's got substantial worldbuilding, Game-Of-Thrones-like scale, or smut!) and be your pen pal.
Most of my favorite books on SH have smut in them, so to me the last element is...probably more important than I'd admit.
Things I'd like feedback on:
1. Is the story something you can see yourself coming back to every week or so?
Like, if this was a weekly TV show, would you stay tuned and check back to see what the characters are up to next?
2. The smut. Is it good? Does it make you curious about the plot/world/character?
Yeah, serious question. I too prefer touching smut over gratuitous ones. I do love writing/reading smut. Probably too much sometimes.
3. Does reading the story make you feel good or drained?
I've been loving SH's 'Glossary' feature, though I get many readers probably don't check those out? Funny thing about my universe is that there really is a host of 100+ characters, dozens of locations/planets/moons/star systems, and over a hundred different items to loot/collect in the backlog. There's a link in my book's blurb that'll take you to its official site (built by me) and you'll see the sheer amount of...stuffs it has.
After studying my old book's flaws, I'm drip feeding things and doing what I feel necessary to keep it manageable for the reader's benefit this time. The story remains multi POV, though, and conflicts/highly stressful moments remain in the plot. Nonetheless, I'm curious whether this story is now something that someone can happily enjoy after a long day at work.
Just as a general remark, you're welcome to praise or roast anything in my book.
Thanks, and I look forward to your responses!
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