Tripleblack
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Hello and thank you for showing interest in my post. As the title says, I want someone to read my story and tell me how far they got and what you didn't like about it.
I've already gotten feedback on the start of my story and I'm in the process of reworking it, but since I'm doing that I figured I wanted some feedback on the rest of the story too.
Also, this might be a pushing it a bit, but if you notice any typos/stuff that doesn't make sense, please let me know. I write most of these chapters late at night before bed and some stuff might fall through the cracks. Overall though I do think the writing quality is pretty good.
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I've already gotten feedback on the start of my story and I'm in the process of reworking it, but since I'm doing that I figured I wanted some feedback on the rest of the story too.
Also, this might be a pushing it a bit, but if you notice any typos/stuff that doesn't make sense, please let me know. I write most of these chapters late at night before bed and some stuff might fall through the cracks. Overall though I do think the writing quality is pretty good.
The Revival of The Vampire Empress!
Crimson-haired, ancient, and terrifyingly beautiful, the renowned Vampire Empress had been sealed away for hundreds of years. The one to set her was Veri, a high school boy filled with delusions. Caught in the aftermath of her awakening, Veri is dragged into a hidden world of bloodlines...
