Reaching Beyond Heaven : My Cultivation Had No Negative Effects .

[Tefa]

You really need to check it and state your opinion on it .

 

[Alski]

No link, no effort, no hook = no read.

 

[JayMark]

Reaching Beyond Heaven : My Cultivation Had No Negative Effects .

A person worth in this world is determined by their strength, Tian Long only aim in this new life of his to become someone well-known and respected, for that reason he will aim to be the strongest, will he be able to make it, let's see . ( THIS ISN'T A TRANSLATION )

www.scribblehub.com

It isn't a translation according to front page. That's good.

 

[Lookbehindyou]

blud, the very first sentence has an improper lowercase i

"Aughhhh, my head hurts like as if i had been hit by a truck, i thought ironically to myself"

This is your opening, and it makes me sigh.

Your synopsis has improper grammar too, like literally "A person worth" should be "A person's worth" and MORE errors just in the tiny synopsis

1 fav on all three chaps and 1 rating clearly all from yourself

I detect you are prob very young or non english speaker. If you really want to write something, please get a grammar checker.

No hard feelings, just stating opinion as directed. I wish you the best.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

even the thread title is written like that oml (why is there a space between the end of the sentence and the dot + no need for a dot there innit)

 

[Grizzly18]

This is not the way to promote your book. Buckle down write more interact with your readers have them favorite and write reviews on your work. This isn’t a thing where you will become instantly popular because of a few chapters. Most minimally successful writers have to wait until their stories get to 50 chapters because long time users of Scribblehub know that unless a writer gets at least that far the author in question is probably going to stop writing. Marathon, guy, not a sprint. Good luck

 

[Tefa]

You guys are funny, glad you aren't overreacting lol, well guess I'm lucky I had survived not deleting it after those harsh comments, but glad that some of you still gave it a go and yes I believe it is quite good and there's like 70 chapters of it published already for these who afraid of consistency .

Do your research and give it a go or not, completely up to you .

Notice I'm not a native speaker, but you will be able to read and understand everything, so don't worry .

even the thread title is written like that oml (why is there a space between the end of the sentence and the dot + no need for a dot there innit)

And here I thought that you would actually have some actual feedback, disappointing .

This is not the way to promote your book. Buckle down write more interact with your readers have them favorite and write reviews on your work. This isn’t a thing where you will become instantly popular because of a few chapters. Most minimally successful writers have to wait until their stories get to 50 chapters because long time users of Scribblehub know that unless a writer gets at least that far the author in question is probably going to stop writing. Marathon, guy, not a sprint. Good luck

Thanks for clearing that out, but this was more of an announcement than that of a promotion, I did this for my previous book which close to having a 70+ chapters, this book also had over 70+ chapters in store, but as I said before this isn't a promotion, just announcing that I'm writing another book for those who are interested, again you have my thanks .

blud, the very first sentence has an improper lowercase i

"Aughhhh, my head hurts like as if i had been hit by a truck, i thought ironically to myself"

This is your opening, and it makes me sigh.

Your synopsis has improper grammar too, like literally "A person worth" should be "A person's worth" and MORE errors just in the tiny synopsis

1 fav on all three chaps and 1 rating clearly all from yourself

I detect you are prob very young or non english speaker. If you really want to write something, please get a grammar checker.

No hard feelings, just stating opinion as directed. I wish you the best.

Can't argue with that, no hard feelings but they have become 16 and another one 5 stars rating and only publishing one day a week, the problem might be fixed in the later chapters, but I still don't recommend you to stick around .

No link, no effort, no hook = no read.

Catching a stray L, wow, ever heard of a search button .

Reaching Beyond Heaven : My Cultivation Had No Negative Effects .

A person worth in this world is determined by their strength, Tian Long only aim in this new life of his to become someone well-known and respected, for that reason he will aim to be the strongest, will he be able to make it, let's see . ( THIS ISN'T A TRANSLATION )

www.scribblehub.com

It isn't a translation according to front page. That's good.

Salute to a fellow comrade .

 

[L1aei]

I really wish I could react with laughing at all of this shit, but I'm still waiting to like @Racosharko 's.

Alright, I get the vibe in here, and it ain't pretty. But, you, @Tefa , if you wanna get some good feedback to keep your novel breathing, don't keep fanning the flames or you're gonna get smoked.

 

[Tefa]

I really wish I could react with laughing at all of this shit, but I'm still waiting to like @Racosharko 's.

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Alright, I get the vibe in here, and it ain't pretty. But, you, @Tefa , if you wanna get some good feedback to keep your novel breathing, don't keep fanning the flames or you're gonna get smoked.

Sorry but no sorry

I really wish I could react with laughing at all of this shit, but I'm still waiting to like @Racosharko 's.

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Alright, I get the vibe in here, and it ain't pretty. But, you, @Tefa , if you wanna get some good feedback to keep your novel breathing, don't keep fanning the flames or you're gonna get smoked.

I really don't know what is going on here, but let me say this loud and clear, IDGAF about feedback to keep my novel breathing, the feedback I want is that which can help me in writing and since these aren't one, I really don't care in the slightest, at most I will keep uploading elsewhere, smoked huh, if my novel really wasn't good enough for me at least then I wanted it gone more than you do .

 

[L1aei]

Sorry but no sorry

I really don't know what is going on here, but let me say this loud and clear, IDGAF about feedback to keep my novel breathing, the feedback I want is that which can help me in writing and since these aren't one, I really don't care in the slightest, at most I will keep uploading elsewhere, smoked huh, if my novel really wasn't good enough for me at least then I wanted gone, more than you do .

You really NEED to check it and state your opinion on it .

Either you don't know what you're saying or I beg to differ on your situation. Either way, my intent is getting things back on track in your thread. If you can't listen to the first implications on why they're not searching for your title, make it easier. Be accessible. If you don't care about exposure, why are you promoting yourself?

 

[Racosharko]

*swiftly deletes my light hearted quippy comment and feedback.

 

[Tefa]

Either you don't know what you're saying or I beg to differ on your situation. Either way, my intent is getting things back on track in your thread. If you can't listen to the first implications on why they're not searching for your title, make it easier. Be accessible. If you don't care about exposure, why are you promoting yourself?

It's not promoting, I'm announcing that I'm creating a new book and that was all see the date that this thread came out in, sorry for my outburst earlier, it's just I let my true self out for a while and it already created such a miss, sorry again, but when I will be promoting my work, I will take your advice .

 

[L1aei]

It's not promoting, I'm announcing that I'm creating a new book and that was all see the date that this thread came out in, sorry for my outburst earlier, it's just I let my true self out for a while and it already created such a miss, sorry again, but when I will be promoting my work, I will take your advice .