Quickly, I need a chapter title!

[Juia_Darkcrest]

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

 

[L1aei]

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

The sexual inuendo from that one... Jesus.

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

Yeah, I voted on the second one by default. You're gonna mislead readers if there isn't some sort of beef cake for them to drool over.

 

[Daeron]

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

Cookin' with Lasers better.

Or if i may suggested "Blazing Light" or "Over-heat"

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

The sexual inuendo from that one... Jesus.



Yeah, I voted on the second one by default. You're gonna mislead readers if there isn't some sort of beef cake for them to drool over.

Hahah... that would be amusing... naw he was wearing his leather clothing (something that he has carried between worlds for awhile now) and ended up drenched due to overheating his mech.

Point taken though ty
Thanks everyone I'll use the 2nd one.

 

[Eldoria]

A good title is one that doesn't misunderstand the reader. You get my point.

 

[Anonjohn20]

What a landslide in this election.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

A good title is one that doesn't misunderstand the reader. You get my point.

100% though as most of my readers at that point (Ch130) would be aware of where he was at, the 1st wouldn't be completely misleading.

 

[Bald-san]

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

I think in your heart you already know the answer

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

I think in your heart you already know the answer

yeah, but everyone voted for the other... maybe for another chapter =P

 

[Corty]

IMMA FIRIN MAH LAZOOOOOR

So of course, it's the second.

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

IMMA FIRIN MAH LAZOOOOOR

So of course, it's the second.

hahah i forgot that line!

 

[Prince_Azmiran_Myrian]

Second is well done.

 

[NotaNuffian]

hahah i forgot that line!

Being a contrarian here because fun.

The first is very generic and little erotic, but it's fun.

Cookin with lasers sounds very middle school. Fun, but middle school.

 

[JayMark]

Basted, salted.... cooking with lazers...

I don't accept your terminology!

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

Basted, salted.... cooking with lazers...

I don't accept your terminology!

Says the OnlyFans cow