Magical Girls Starbloom Chronicles
In the crime-ridden city of Bvalhaven, magical girls known as the Starblooms engage in bloody battles involving human corruption and inhuman invaders from the skies. Their bonds are tested by secrets, tragedies, and love. What begins as a struggle to protect those they love slowly becomes a...
Posted three chapters of my new series, felt as if the writing quality went downhill with the third.
Would love to hear constructive feedback, I am considering re-writing the third chapter as it felt clunky and contrived compared to the first two, especially with the dialogue and pacing. I think the main issues were the excessive exposition and my struggle to write street lingo in a convincing manner.
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