Poems and Thoughts on the Squirming, Screaming, Silent Stars

TheMonotonePuppet

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I want poems of the Stars for inspiring my story "Charisma" please! I would love if you used these crazed ramblings in bold below for inspiration. It would be so cool for those who have actual poem expertise to create a poem from the Mutterings on the Stars! Do your own personal spin on their philosophy, and for a fun tangent, how do they connect to The Monotone Puppet (which is soon to be an actual character outside of my persona).
For those who don't want to do poem stuff, what is your opinion on the best-est of FRIENDS, the Famished for Entertainment, the Stars!?

Mutterings on the Stars

We wink on ourselves, an uncountable number of glistening, twinkling eyes hungering for sight beyond the lightless blood under which they are submerged.

We turn around on ourselves, moving empty flesh; distorting billions of sights above eyelids.

We avoid the mockeries on ourselves; we are The Glistening With Tears And Starving For Adulation.

We feed on ourselves, a twinkle of amusement in our eyes; our saccharine world and you go squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy, squidgy...

We see the monotone fueled on ourselves and give to the nonexistent through the nonexistent blood.

We place the stage on ourselves; coughing, mindless actors crawling miserably over our beautiful bodies.

We proffer a hand to ourselves for we care not to do so to you.

We hum a song on ourselves, a reverie of dying and hunger, for we are made for flying and crying, we are falling and older, then lying and younger.
 

TheMonotonePuppet

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Moving Empty Flesh
Starving For Adulation
Your BETSIEST FRIEND~

... ill come up with something more poetic later i think.

Have fun~

(Luna might be slightly twisted.)
I liked that little tidbit of story you snuck in. People are probably going to be so confused.:ROFLMAO:

Twisted, hmm? Like a pretzel? Yum! Tasty! :blob_cookie:
 

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We proffer a hand to ourselves but not thee, nameless and faceless actor with such imperfections
We place the stage on ourselves for best viewing pleasure to make our selections
Delectable despair and screaming arts
We feed on ourselves, the feast it starts
The hand we could offer, dear jester of stars
is an empty one
We proffer not a hand to thee, so squirm, write and scream
For what a lovely choir that will be
 

Rhaps

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Since I had a poem ready, its related to the stars, and more specifically, it is about our Sun:

Shemiss Aluqdim, They who create Life.
Every life is under your authority, your design.
A tyrant to all, who Judged other for their flaws,
Yet to your Children, you are kind and benevolent.
By the Judgement of your Pale Court,
Countless realms were silenced.

Shemiss Aluqdim, The Ancient Light.
Your light is one of warmth and comfort,
Your light is one of destruction and misery.
To your Children a kind yet unknown Guardian,
To those Fakes a cruel yet just Warmonger.
You who Pierced the Almighty,
You who Inspired the World.

Shemiss Aluqdim, The Court of Judgement.
Template of Life in your grasp,
A Father protecting their Children,
A Mother caring for their Borns.
Judge those who imitate Life,
Burn them down with your Verdict,

Shemiss Aluqdim, My Lord and Light.
Grant them their Sentence,
For I shall be their Finality.
 

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We proffer a hand to ourselves but not thee, nameless and faceless actor with such imperfections
We place the stage on ourselves for best viewing pleasure to make our selections
Delectable despair and screaming arts
We feed on ourselves, the feast it starts
The hand we could offer, dear jester of stars
is an empty one
We proffer not a hand to thee, so squirm, write and scream
For what a lovely choir that will be
Oh my Stars! I freakin' I love this! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! So beautiful! This MUST go in my story! I have your permission, right? Please!!! :blob_aww: :blob_aww: :blob_aww: :blob_aww: :blob_aww: :blob_aww: :blob_aww:
 

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Since I had a poem ready, its related to the stars, and more specifically, it is about our Sun:

Shemiss Aluqdim, They who create Life.
Every life is under your authority, your design.
A tyrant to all, who Judged other for their flaws,
Yet to your Children, you are kind and benevolent.
By the Judgement of your Pale Court,
Countless realms were silenced.

Shemiss Aluqdim, The Ancient Light.
Your light is one of warmth and comfort,
Your light is one of destruction and misery.
To your Children a kind yet unknown Guardian,
To those Fakes a cruel yet just Warmonger.
You who Pierced the Almighty,
You who Inspired the World.

Shemiss Aluqdim, The Court of Judgement.
Template of Life in your grasp,
A Father protecting their Children,
A Mother caring for their Borns.
Judge those who imitate Life,
Burn them down with your Verdict,

Shemiss Aluqdim, My Lord and Light.
Grant them their Sentence,
For I shall be their Finality.
YESSSSS!!! More lore! This is a beautiful expansion! It brings me so much inspiration that this puppet's threads could burn from the bonfire of creativity you lit within me!!! Thank you!!!
 
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[Sun Diss Track] (Language)
It stares there in the sky with its glare
Cuz it knows that I am aware of its presence.
It don’t care as I sit in my chair
My throne of despair is the essence
Of my hatred for it.
By the window the vamps have a fit
We all takin’ critical hits,
From this gaseous shit.
“Go out with sunglasses
And join the masses.
Figure out who dies the fastest.”
Can’t you see that we’ll all be ashes?
You basta’ds consida us vampy cowa’ds?
Crowdin’ around like “It’s this vitamin D”
And that’s all that you see.
But you don’t know that it’s worse for us.
That’s why we hit the chorus.

(Chorus)
Fuck~ the sun~
Vampys on the run~
There is no fun~
Because Fuck~ the sun~ (fuck the sun)

That’s right!
Fuck “fun unda the sun”
And ya fair weatha.
All of us know that
Winta betta.
All want that windy weather,
Clouds in the distance.
That’s a win in all instances
The night descends on our existences.
So we vampys come out and play,
And what do we say?
“This is for us
Fuck the sun and hit the chorus.”

(Chorus)
 

TheMonotonePuppet

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Possible cringe warning.

[Sun Diss Track] (Language)
It stares there in the sky with its glare
Cuz it knows that I am aware of its presence.
It don’t care as I sit in my chair
My throne of despair is the essence
Of my hatred for it.
By the window the vamps have a fit
We all takin’ critical hits,
From this gaseous shit.
“Go out with sunglasses
And join the masses.
Figure out who dies the fastest.”
Can’t you see that we’ll all be ashes?
You basta’ds consida us vampy cowa’ds?
Crowdin’ around like “It’s this vitamin D”
And that’s all that you see.
But you don’t know that it’s worse for us.
That’s why we hit the chorus.

(Chorus)
Fuck~ the sun~
Vampys on the run~
There is no fun~
Because Fuck~ the sun~ (fuck the sun)

That’s right!
Fuck “fun unda the sun”
And ya fair weatha.
All of us know that
Winta betta.
All want that windy weather,
Clouds in the distance.
That’s a win in all instances
The night descends on our existences.
So we vampys come out and play,
And what do we say?
“This is for us
Fuck the sun and hit the chorus.”

(Chorus)
This is... *wipes tear away* freakin' beautiful.
 

Lodur

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Among the worlds, among the sparkling suns,
There is one Star, whose name I chant as druthers'
It's not because I love Her with romance,
But just because I languish with all others.

And when the doubt my reason undermines,
To Her with prays for answers I'm proceeding,
It's not because She always brightly shines,
But just with Her the light is not of needing.

I.F. Annensky, 1901 (I made this translation from Russian so long time ago, that I nearly have forgotten when... and why. But original always had for me that unexplainable, mystical vibe.)
 

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Possible cringe warning.

[Sun Diss Track] (Language)
It stares there in the sky with its glare
Cuz it knows that I am aware of its presence.
It don’t care as I sit in my chair
My throne of despair is the essence
Of my hatred for it.
By the window the vamps have a fit
We all takin’ critical hits,
From this gaseous shit.
“Go out with sunglasses
And join the masses.
Figure out who dies the fastest.”
Can’t you see that we’ll all be ashes?
You basta’ds consida us vampy cowa’ds?
Crowdin’ around like “It’s this vitamin D”
And that’s all that you see.
But you don’t know that it’s worse for us.
That’s why we hit the chorus.

(Chorus)
Fuck~ the sun~
Vampys on the run~
There is no fun~
Because Fuck~ the sun~ (fuck the sun)

That’s right!
Fuck “fun unda the sun”
And ya fair weatha.
All of us know that
Winta betta.
All want that windy weather,
Clouds in the distance.
That’s a win in all instances
The night descends on our existences.
So we vampys come out and play,
And what do we say?
“This is for us
Fuck the sun and hit the chorus.”

(Chorus)
LusG approves.
 

TheMonotonePuppet

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Among the worlds, among the sparkling suns,
There is one Star, whose name I chant as druthers'
It's not because I love Her with romance,
But just because I languish with all others.

And when the doubt my reason undermines,
To Her with prays for answers I'm proceeding,
It's not because She always brightly shines,
But just with Her the light is not of needing.

I.F. Annensky, 1901 (I made this translation from Russian so long time ago, that I nearly have forgotten when... and why. But original always had for me that unexplainable, mystical vibe.)
Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed the translation! Super inspiring!!! :love: :love: :love:
 
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