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DeepWater said:
I tried reading chapter one and noticed your first sentence is present tense and then everything after is past tense. WTF happened there man?
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Actually, the first chapter was a real disaster, but I am trying to improve my writing because English isn't my first language and writing new chapters and rewrite the first chapters in a neutral way. So, I am trying.
Have you looked at the next chapters because they are better and I have made significant progress according to the opinions of many readers, specifically chapter 4 and 5.
 
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Omnii said:
I can understand using the alt to promote your story in that other thread... but why write compliments when asking for advice?
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Think about it with me, if you see someone's post asking for advice then you see someone's comments saying it's okay, it might make you curious and take a look ?.
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Omnii said:
I can understand using the alt to promote your story in that other thread... but why write compliments when asking for advice?
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And I know I am not that good or bad.
 
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