Please review the story. I just started out

[HBN]

The Silent Circuitry

The story takes place in a futuristic 2079 version of Islamabad and Rawalpindi, where advanced artificial intelligence (AI) technology has become deeply integrated into society. The cities are characterized by towering skyscrapers juxtaposed with traditional bazaars, reflecting the fusion of...

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[StoneInky]

Eh, not my preferred genre, so I'll leave this review to someone else.

I'll only suggest you edit the synopsis. The synopsis is not a prologue, a summary, or a place for you to explain your setting; it is where you're supposed to give your readers expectations for what the story is about, and hook em in. But I'm not hooked by yours. Consider putting the plot overview at the front, and the setting explanation at the end. Or maybe even just delete the exposition and focus on tone and the fun bits, so that it actually sounds interesting.

 

[LEGENDGOD1]

Eh, not my preferred genre, so I'll leave this review to someone else.

I'll only suggest you edit the synopsis. The synopsis is not a prologue, a summary, or a place for you to explain your setting; it is where you're supposed to give your readers expectations for what the story is about, and hook em in. But I'm not hooked by yours. Consider putting the plot overview at the front, and the setting explanation at the end. Or maybe even just delete the exposition and focus on tone and the fun bits, so that it actually sounds interesting.

Then read mine you Dum Dum, it's called Cosmeta. advice is appreciated. :)