Hello! I hope you've got a great day today. Please read my first story "Tales of the Grapevine" it is a compilation of stories that I write in leisure and hope you'll leave feedback. I will appreciate it if you leave a comment on how I can enhance my writing.
PLEASE READ MY FIRST POSTED STORY
- Thread starter JewelChan
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Leti
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I have read your story and found some things that can be improved.
I think you shouldn't left the synopsis (or description) of the story blank. Tell the readers what to expect from it. "A compilation of short stories", for example.
Another thing of note is the wall of text on some paragraphs. Try splitting one large paragraphs into several smaller paragraphs. It enhances readability. Other than that, I saw nothing wrong with your writing. Keep up the good work!
I think you shouldn't left the synopsis (or description) of the story blank. Tell the readers what to expect from it. "A compilation of short stories", for example.
Another thing of note is the wall of text on some paragraphs. Try splitting one large paragraphs into several smaller paragraphs. It enhances readability. Other than that, I saw nothing wrong with your writing. Keep up the good work!
CameronCooke
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I'm new here and I am not clear on how to find your story. Kindly explain so I can read it.
Maple-Leaf
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I can hear the yelling through the title.