killwrites
Need motivation
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It's been on the backburner for quite a while now, but I hope to post the prologue to motivate myself more lol. Anyway, what are your thoughts on this synopsis to draw new readers in? 
「I'm sick of pretending any longer, Hero」
On the night before the evil Demon Lord's subjugation, the Hero of Eltshion came face to face with the betrayal of those she considered the closest to her. With a mocking smile, her trusted elf companion Alishia mercilessly killed her while the rest of her party watched on.
The story of the failed Hero was thenceforth written in fate.
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Tokyo, Japan
Seventeen-year-old Avery has always lived with a nagging feeling of estrangement, as if a voice in his mind is telling him that he does not truly belong in this world. While on an overnight flight to study abroad, he suddenly wakes up with his memories of his past life as the Hero returned. And the mysterious girl sitting beside him is now claiming to be a Goddess who needs his help—but what can he even do?
In a world without magic or power, is Avery's fate sealed from the start? Or will the reincarnated Hero's story begin anew?
On the night before the evil Demon Lord's subjugation, the Hero of Eltshion came face to face with the betrayal of those she considered the closest to her. With a mocking smile, her trusted elf companion Alishia mercilessly killed her while the rest of her party watched on.
The story of the failed Hero was thenceforth written in fate.
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Tokyo, Japan
Seventeen-year-old Avery has always lived with a nagging feeling of estrangement, as if a voice in his mind is telling him that he does not truly belong in this world. While on an overnight flight to study abroad, he suddenly wakes up with his memories of his past life as the Hero returned. And the mysterious girl sitting beside him is now claiming to be a Goddess who needs his help—but what can he even do?
In a world without magic or power, is Avery's fate sealed from the start? Or will the reincarnated Hero's story begin anew?
