Please give feedback for my Action/Fanatsy novel

[ScarletWeeb]

Please give feedback for my novel Return of the Shadow CEO
I have posted 11 chaps till now, so feedback would be appreciated (Feedback for Feedback obviously)

Thanks

 

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[CL]

Please give feedback for my novel Return of the Shadow CEO
I have posted 11 chaps till now, so feedback would be appreciated (Feedback for Feedback obviously)

Thanks

I'll take a look at it this weekend. So that'll make you my second read and feedback for my time off. I'll let you know what I think.