Partial rewrite feedback

[HellsPerfectSpawn]

A very terrifying link I've been told but it's safe

https://1drv.ms/w/c/38c795050893b76a/IQCST3xw8DNHRqjPinFG-jlwAbL3aFuaLS--QfI5ZD4uMlE?e=piQIOL

It's just a small rewrite. I'd be supremely grateful if anyone checks it out