Okay, let's do a first chapter review swap

[PBJ_Time]

I already published my book after a million revisions, so I might as well review other people's first chapters while they review mine. Like I said before, I'll read anything, including smut, gender bender, etc. I'm not picky.

If you're into isekai litRPGs, please let me know what you think about my story because I will do the same for you as fast as I can. Thank you!

Beware the Horde [Isekai LitRPG]

New chapters every MWF, 8:00 PM EST. Also available on Royal Road. *** ~Too raw to live, too far to die.~ MMA fanatic and local champion Hajime Kato once thought the world was his oyster. Now, after his untimely death, he gets thrown into a new reality dominated by a game screen...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Snake99]

The cover is very cool

 

[Little-Moon]

I already published my book after a million revisions, so I might as well review other people's first chapters while they review mine. Like I said before, I'll read anything, including smut, gender bender, etc. I'm not picky.

If you're into isekai litRPGs, please let me know what you think about my story because I will do the same for you as fast as I can. Thank you!

Beware the Horde [Isekai LitRPG]

New chapters every MWF, 8:00 PM EST. Also available on Royal Road. *** ~Too raw to live, too far to die.~ MMA fanatic and local champion Hajime Kato once thought the world was his oyster. Now, after his untimely death, he gets thrown into a new reality dominated by a game screen...

www.scribblehub.com

I would be game for a review swap :) below the link to my story.

JING – The last Archmages

Children have gone missing, and the same unknown entity has gruesomely murdered a high-ranking Noble. There are rumors about the wrath of Gods, a vengeful ghost wreaking havoc as more and more evil happens even in broad daylight on the streets, and a rumor is going about a curse lying...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[PBJ_Time]

I would be game for a review swap :) below the link to my story.

JING – The last Archmages

Children have gone missing, and the same unknown entity has gruesomely murdered a high-ranking Noble. There are rumors about the wrath of Gods, a vengeful ghost wreaking havoc as more and more evil happens even in broad daylight on the streets, and a rumor is going about a curse lying...

www.scribblehub.com

Thank you. I'll read your first chapter now, so please let me know when you're done with your review for my own story.

 

[Little-Moon]

Then I'll do so and get reading XD