Ohko's feedback/musings thread (migrated)

[ohko]

Heya, this is the continuation for the feedback/musings thread I originally had on NUF. If you're confused, it's sort of like a workshop/reflection thread.

Thank you to everyone who has been helping me in the writing process of my story (There's no way I'd want boobs that big!) so far!

A brief recap on the conversations so far:

• Currently I'm trying to figure out a new title for the story since the old one was basically all clickbait >.<
• I'm looking for an editor
• I recently made a new cover for the novel
• My writing is really disjointed! >.< It's hard to keep my voice consistent.

If you've read my story and would like to drop feedback or comments on your impressions, or advice on how I can improve, this is a place for it!

Thanks!!