Nothing to see here. Absolutely nothing has been consumed by the void. Dum dee dum...

[ThisAdamGuy]

[THIS POST HAS BEEN CONSUMED BY THE VOID]

 

[dekadust]

Tune down the furry stuff and maybe I can help

 

[ThisAdamGuy]

Tune down the furry stuff and maybe I can help

Nah, I'm good.

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

I've finally written enough of XNPC to give myself a three month backlog when I eventually decide to publish it. This is my first litrpg, though, and I really want to make sure I'm doing it right before I put it up for the whole world to see. I've had people give feedback on various bits and pieces, but never the story as a whole. Would anyone be willing to help me out? It's fifty five chapters a little more than 140,000 words long. It's not finished, but that's roughly 520 pages worth of story written. You don't have to read any farther than you want to, but I'd really appreciate if you could read the whole thing.

Anyone interested? If so, let me know and I'll PM you a link to it on Google Docs. Thanks!

I'm in

 

[ThisAdamGuy]

I'm still looking for beta readers, since hardly anyone who volunteered actually gave me any feedback.

 

[GardenerKing]

I'm still looking for beta readers, since hardly anyone who volunteered actually gave me any feedback.

I will give it a read, so feel free to send a dm

 

[blackcrowcrowd]

I'm still looking for beta readers, since hardly anyone who volunteered actually gave me any feedback.

If you update / rewrite or something along the lines you can DM me again, I'll give feedback again then if I have time. I feel like your concept have potential + comparatively speaking, your writing is actually not that bad