Newbie author wanting some advice

[HyperiousTheSun]

Well I started writing this week and wanted more exposure so here it is 'Under The Moon's Halo'.

I write what I like so it might not be what you would expect going by the other novels on scribble hub.

Well either way just tell me what you think of it because I'm not getting much foot traffic at the moment.

Here the link again for those that didn't see the first one Under the Moon’s Halo | Scribble Hub

 

[scribesaga]

congrats!

You took the first step, and that was to take a chance and submit your work. I was reading your synopsis, and it's interesting.

My advice is for your prologue. You should include some added context around your dialogue. It's hard to tell who's talking and where. You have a lot of dialogue, which is a good thing, but not a lot of context to follow it.

example

She shrugged her shoulders. As she spoke, her voice seemed louder than normal. "dialogue stuff".

"Dialogue stuff," He sent her a swift response.

But it's your book, so do what feels right.