OscarTlau
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I've been reading alot of warhammer books recently, mostly those written by Dan Abnet. Those kind of influenced me into actually improve my writing style.
I really want to know if its noticably improved from the previous chapters I've released. If anyone is willing to spare a short moment to compare the latest chapter to my previous chapter and give a feedback (harsh or nice), I would love to hear you out.
Latest Chapter: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1215877-chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king-brotherhood/chapter/2067185/
And the novel itself: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1215877/chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king-brotherhood/
Just pick any chapter from 1-4 and compare that to the 5th one.
Much love and Merry Christmas :D
I really want to know if its noticably improved from the previous chapters I've released. If anyone is willing to spare a short moment to compare the latest chapter to my previous chapter and give a feedback (harsh or nice), I would love to hear you out.
Latest Chapter: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1215877-chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king-brotherhood/chapter/2067185/
And the novel itself: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1215877/chronicles-of-the-scarlet-king-brotherhood/
Just pick any chapter from 1-4 and compare that to the 5th one.
Much love and Merry Christmas :D