New novel, Feedback and writting overall

[Mercuryo]

Writting a novel for the first and really wanted more opnions on it.
What can i make better or not.
Would appreciate any and all feedback given to it, thanks in advance!
Power system, system?!?

 

[GrotesqueHeaven]

Okay, I finished the 4th chapter before writing this. I really like it, looks like an isekai into Sett from League. MC is cool. Just few things - the name is super very ultra generic. Also gacha system is strangely explained. It sounded like the pulled abilities are consumed upon use or are instantly used after pulling. And in the 4th chapter you didn't add text formatting to the system AI and guide's lines. I think that's all I can say. Overall, if it's your first time writing a story, you did way better than me tbh.