New Novel - Any feedback. The Ascendants: Early Years – Lightning, Fire, Shadows… and Brotherhood

PandaKen07

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Hello guys!
I’ve been working hard revising and improving my novel “The Ascendants: Early Years”, and I’m hoping to get your honest feedback and thoughts on it!

This is a story about three young boys who are destined to become legends, trained by a mysterious master and thrown into a world filled with mana beasts, magic, and danger. Think fantasy meets anime energy… with some inspiration from "The Shield" yep, that Shield from WWE.

 
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