new erotica writer looking for feedback and constructive criticism

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Here are the details of my stories. Please comment or message me.

Collateral

Ezra, an innocent and young bakery worker is thrust into the exhilarating lifestyle of a mafia boss. After his father fled the country, his family is left with a large gambling debt. Unable to pay the debt on a minimum wage salary, he runs away and goes into hiding. However, Stefan Alfonso his creditor is intent on making the boy his and proposes a jaw-dropping alternative.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1007675/collateral/

• bdsm
• bl
• boyxboy
• bxb
• cnc
• debt
• domination
• erotica
• gayfiction
• mafia
• manxboy
• manxman
• mature
• romance
• sadism
• sliceoflife
• submission
• violence
• yaoi

Maneater

Naomi is the beautiful, seductive and conniving queen bee of her high school. It was her senior year and she was intent on leaving a lasting impact on her peers. After a revelation that could possibly shake her throne, her eyes wander onto her innocent and sweet classmate Jason Choi. His calm and gentle demeanor drew her in, contrasting her calculated ways. Naomi decides that she will make the handsome boy hers, by any means necessary.

All characters are 18 years or older.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1094162/maneater/

• ambw
• blackgirl
• eroticromance
• femaledomination
• femdom
• hierarchy
• lust
• malesubmission
• manipulation
• seduction
• shortstory
• social