OscarTlau
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Hello! Im back FINALLY after my PC broke down due to electrical issues.
Anyways, the new chapter of my (reworked) novel just dropped and I want to request some sincere feedbacks.
I am trying to get better at writing tension and super fast action scenes, so abit of advices on those would really help
Thanks in advance and the next chapter will likely release same time next week. Also I've been reading warhammer books (know no fear) and i was wondering if I should try out their style of writting for this novel.
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Anyways, the new chapter of my (reworked) novel just dropped and I want to request some sincere feedbacks.
I am trying to get better at writing tension and super fast action scenes, so abit of advices on those would really help
Thanks in advance and the next chapter will likely release same time next week. Also I've been reading warhammer books (know no fear) and i was wondering if I should try out their style of writting for this novel.
Chronicles of the Scarlet King: Brotherhood.
In an universe ravaged by a relentless demonic invasion, Earth is on the brink of annihilation. Victor Williams—an elite soldier of the Apex Operatives, who yearns to find a valid purpose other than war, finds himself nearly dying by the hands of an arch-demon. Saved by a mysterious figure,...