Hi !
I just posted the first two chapters (one prologue and one chapter really) of my story. I already outlined the whole story and I would like feedback on the first chapters to improve my writings as I go. Be brutally honest (but not mean please, I'm a softie). Please bear in mind I'm not a native English speaker, I'm French so you may find french tendencies such as the dialogue format. Thank you in advance c:
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I just posted the first two chapters (one prologue and one chapter really) of my story. I already outlined the whole story and I would like feedback on the first chapters to improve my writings as I go. Be brutally honest (but not mean please, I'm a softie). Please bear in mind I'm not a native English speaker, I'm French so you may find french tendencies such as the dialogue format. Thank you in advance c:
Dulmhak
They called her the Traitor, the Saviour, the Indecent, the Repentant, without ever really trying to understand her story. But before all that, she had been Serina Willhelm, a girl from the South who had been admitted on her merits to Eryndor, the best school in the world. And for...