TaroMasayuki
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Hello!
I'm a new author here, and I’d really appreciate some feedback on my story.
Best Friend To Girlfriend? Denied!
The chapters is already published, and I’d love to fix any issues or improve it further.
I'm a new author here, and I’d really appreciate some feedback on my story.
Best Friend To Girlfriend? Denied!
The chapters is already published, and I’d love to fix any issues or improve it further.
- Is the opening engaging enough?
- Are there any awkward or unnatural phrases?
- Do the dialogues flow well?