Need second pair of eyes

TheEldritchGod

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Yeah so, I write ahead along certain plot lines. Wrote up the conclusion to one, but...
You ever get that feeling that MAYBE you nailed it or maybe you fucked up bad, but you aren't sure?
Like, I either scored a hundred or a zero. One or the other. Anyways, my usual pair of second eyes isn't available for... a while.

You don't have to have read flip the script, but it might help to have. I need a second set of eyes, and you also need to keep quiet, because I don't want to spoil the twist for everyone else, so maybe NOT having read it would be better.

Any rate, PM me and I'll pick someone at random. It's about 3500 words right now, in rough draft status and would most likely be broken up into two chapters, or more. Not sure.

Just warning you. This is a very sensitive topic. No holds barred here. This is not a request for the curious yet faint of heart.
 
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Zirrboy

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Maybe remove the part about what you want it to be?
You can always ask that after they've given their own impressions and this way it threatens to skew those imo
 

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