Good day to all! I hope you are all healthy and doing well. If possible, I need opinions about:
1) If my dialogues sound normal.
2) If I give enough, too many, or not enough descriptions.
3) If my grammar is decent or awful.
Here's the chapter for which I need the feedback: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1950602-overcome/chapter/2017211/
1) If my dialogues sound normal.
2) If I give enough, too many, or not enough descriptions.
3) If my grammar is decent or awful.
Here's the chapter for which I need the feedback: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1950602-overcome/chapter/2017211/