Need feedback on my new story please

[Zenomew]

Hi, I would love some feedback on this story I have just started writing.It is not much only three chapters but I hope I can get some thoughts on this

Here is the link https://www.scribblehub.com/read/10...wants-to-learn-magic-circles/chapter/1096992/

 

[Verdant]

I’m not going to lie the chapter 1 intro was 10x better than I thought it would be. I was fully hooked by the immense detail and fluid retelling. Jotun felt unimaginably powerful and bigger than life itself. A true foe that strikes fear so heavy in the hearts of mortals that they sink to the abyss of the ocean!

Descriptive words and sentences alongside dialogue are definitely your strong points. Maybe it’s because i’m slightly picky or whatever but going in, I expected it to be a generic novel.. My guess on that is the title.