Need feedback on my meta isekai story

[Deleted member 93348]

Honestly, I’ll keep making threads like these in hopes it’ll gain traction someday. All you need to know is that my MC is overpowered but not exactly a conventional “hero,” and the prose is humorous and self-aware in many ways.

You can review as many chapters you like, but stopping at chapter 3 or 5 is fine. Also, you can comment on the document.

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[Deleted member 19066]

traction

Traction? What do you mean?

 

[Deleted member 93348]

Traction? What do you mean?

I didn’t get any replies when I asked for feedback the first time.

 

[LunaSoltaer]

Part of it could be that I just didnt see this, though it being in a google doc and already 10 chapters does make somewhat of a daunting ask.

Are you asking specifically for a review of all 10 chapters or something more standard like prologue plus first chapter?

 

[Deleted member 93348]

Part of it could be that I just didnt see this, though it being in a google doc and already 10 chapters does make somewhat of a daunting ask.

Are you asking specifically for a review of all 10 chapters or something more standard like prologue plus first chapter?

Just three or five chapters will do. I apologize for not clarifying.