NEED FEEDBACK ON LATEST CHAPTER OF MY NOVEL" DARKER OBSESSION" NEW CHAPTER IS OUT NOW

[Shanikumar]

So it's my very first novel and very first' try to write I need feedback about my story characters and the overall flow, I want honest feedback weather it's harsh brutal or elegant whatever you think about it please let me now , and please do Read DARKER OBSESSION it's I am sure you like it . Thankyou so much!?

Laink :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1764600/

 

[lydiawinehouse]

So it's my very first novel and very first' try to write I need feedback about my story characters and the overall flow, I want honest feedback weather it's harsh brutal or elegant whatever you think about it please let me now , and please do Read DARKER OBSESSION it's I am sure you like it . Thankyou so much!?

Laink :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1764600/

sure Kumar, as I'm reading your forum I will try my best to give a review on your story. If you don't mind I also want the same thing from you as I also recently starting to write in Scribble Hub, even if its comment, sharing or even like I would appreciate if you do that, especially adding one of my novel to your reading list. Bye! - https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1745843/lunacy-of-a-forsaken-child/