Need beta readers for battle royale focused fantasy gamelit

ThisAdamGuy

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I've been working on my latest story, Road to Olympus, for a couple months now. This is the first time I've ever written anything like this, and I honestly have no idea if I'm doing a good job or not. It centers around a massive battle royale tournament that's held every ten years, with the winner becoming god for the next decade. It has multiple POV characters that we'll follow throughout the tournament, each with their own reason for wanting to join. If anyone would be willing to beta read what I have written so far, I'd really appreciate it. It's a little more than 50,000 words long, and nowhere near done. You don't have to read the whole thing (unless you want to) just enough to give me an idea of if I'm on the right track and what I need to fix. If you're interested, let me know and I'll message you a link to the Google Doc. Thanks in advance!
 
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