I would love to hear honest opinions about the book, even the bad ones.
Since this is my first story, I don't have much experience. I love the genre and I'm going to finish the book. I've already built the basic world (levels, ranks, etc.) and also the main characters' personalities (their traits, emotions, motives, etc.). But I don't know if I'm really developing and deepening these characteristics in the story effectively. So I would really appreciate your opinions on this part.
Rise of a Lunar Legend
Since this is my first story, I don't have much experience. I love the genre and I'm going to finish the book. I've already built the basic world (levels, ranks, etc.) and also the main characters' personalities (their traits, emotions, motives, etc.). But I don't know if I'm really developing and deepening these characteristics in the story effectively. So I would really appreciate your opinions on this part.
Rise of a Lunar Legend