My first novel

PlotTwistJosh

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Hey readers — Chapters 1 to 5 of Escape from the Ghost Hotel are now live.

Han Ga-in has died 98 times. On her 99th life, she wakes up in Hotel Pioneer — a place outside of time, full of locked doors, shifting rules, and other guests who aren’t what they seem. There’s a status screen, a limited number of “advice” uses, and monsters waiting for mistakes. Survival is a game, and the clock’s already ticking.

These early chapters dive into:

A cold open straight into the unknown

The hotel's strange rules and how they twist normal logic

Group dynamics: cooperation, tension, distrust

First real threats and first real losses


Here’s a sample:

“You’ve used 1 out of 3 advice.”
“Yeah,” Ga-in muttered. “And all I got was a warning I already knew.”



If you like high-stakes mystery, survival games, or psychological tension in locked-room settings — this might be for you.

Start here:

Any feedback’s appreciated especially on pacing, clarity, or what keeps you turning pages. First series, trying to improve each chapter.
 
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