kamiyoaito
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Hello, I’m a beginner writer who’s been carrying many stories in my head since I was a kid. But since I know I’m still a novice, I decided to start with a new story I came up with—one I’m not emotionally tied to (which doesn’t mean I don’t care about it)—so I can improve and, one day, write the story I truly want to tell.
That said, I’d like to ask if someone could review my novel. For now, after rereading and considering some feedback, I’m aware of one issue: I have problems with verb tenses (I’m also notice of other possible issues, but I’d rather not give any spoilers / influence opinions.). I should also mention that English is not my native language, so I use AI for translation and then review it myself (I can read any story just fine, but writing with proper grammar and using idioms correctly is something that gets out of my hands). Plus, I’m tired of the only feedback I get being from an AI. And yes, this was translated by an AI TT.
My New Body Came With a Glitch | Scribble Hub
If you have some time, I’d really appreciate your opinion on my work.
That said, I’d like to ask if someone could review my novel. For now, after rereading and considering some feedback, I’m aware of one issue: I have problems with verb tenses (I’m also notice of other possible issues, but I’d rather not give any spoilers / influence opinions.). I should also mention that English is not my native language, so I use AI for translation and then review it myself (I can read any story just fine, but writing with proper grammar and using idioms correctly is something that gets out of my hands). Plus, I’m tired of the only feedback I get being from an AI. And yes, this was translated by an AI TT.
My New Body Came With a Glitch | Scribble Hub
If you have some time, I’d really appreciate your opinion on my work.