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[gencerstain]

hello there!

if you all could be so kind to me, could you please take a look at my book and kindly leave feedback?

tell me what can i do to improve my book?

here is the link for my book https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1062523/knights-tale--the-dark-knight/

and a little troll bait, who do you think can have the most Japanese-manga growth between a knight and a wizard?

what i mean as Japanese manga is how a simple superpower like inhuman strength can be expanded into a super powerful superhero that can shoot an air cannon

 

[MasFaqih]

Its depend on their ability, sometime Swordsman Op cause he can slice through magic, and sometime magician can be Op if they can manipulating, probability.