My attempt at an ongoing, first story that needs feedback

[MoodyFoxCat]

Hello to everyone who may stumble upon this thread, I am just someone with a hobby for writing stories, I usually go make short ones out of my own spare time but for this case, it's actually a much bigger one. As far as current story progression goes, I do not mind how a reader would find it.

I just want to know if it's got that potential or something else, of which I'm glad if someone can point out or if they got any other feedbacks they want to type, juar let me know.

I do not mean to imply making it a demand either so if it's clearly not something you like or fancy, I can understand. For those of you who are interested, please take your time as well.

Here's the link, I hope for you reader, that one may enjoy it (or not)

Feel free to ask me about anything as well whether here or somewhere but keep spoilers as spoilers of my story as is.

 

[Leti]

Most readers on ScribbleHub are silent.
For feedback, I recommend these sites. They have point systems that encourage users to leave reviews. If you need opinions for your first chapters in this site, I recommend these threads.

 

[BenJepheneT]

Most readers on ScribbleHub are silent.
For feedback, I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe. Both of those sites have point systems that encourage users to leave reviews.

 

[MoodyFoxCat]

Ah

Most readers on ScribbleHub are silent.
For feedback, I recommend writing.com or WritersCafe. Both of those sites have point systems that encourage users to leave reviews.

I see, then I don't mind either. Thank you though for letting me know.