Thanks for your charity in advance, I guess...
This is the lengthy unrefined version:
_______________________________________________________________________
Magic is the optical illusion made to entertain people. It is just as my career has shown me. You see, I am a magician performer. I do magic in the streets, at birthday parties, and all sorts of gatherings- that kind of gig.
To the supernaturalist, magic is the power to wield supernatural forces to interfere with nature. Since Matt was a kid, he has always dreamt to throw fireballs, turn invisible, then flying using his thoughts as fuel. Alas, what has growth done to him?
Aside from breaking his dreams, separating him from his family, and throwing him into poverty- growth's only redeeming quality is it thought Matt romance...
Cringe but true.
"Hey, Matt. Look what I got here, a magic book! Wanna learn?" Len teasingly said.
Hmmm... Magic huh? Different from a broken dream, I pursued magic as a career interest. Maybe, the dream can still be fixed.
Follow Matt as he rediscovers his broken dreams, endure time, and learn his ideal magic— the starting point of his ascent to the magical peak! See the small-time magician become a magus feared by many.
_______________________________________________________________________
Meanwhile, this is the best I can do...
What is the strongest magic out there?
It's Zeal.
Define magic. I do magic in the streets, at birthday parties, and all sorts of gatherings- that kind of gig. To the traditionalists, magic is the power to wield supernatural forces, to interfere with nature. «Look what I got here, a magic book! Wanna learn?» Len teasingly said.
Different from a broken dream, I pursued magic as a career interest.
_______________________________________________________________________
I am also having a problem with which title sounds better, Z. Mage or Everlasting Mage?
This was my first work, it reeks of my noob side as a writer. But the story is good, just my storytelling technique at that time is horrendously terrible. Some comments motivated me to fix it, to serve it justice. This is my first work, and it meant a lot to me, especially the magic system.
This is the lengthy unrefined version:
_______________________________________________________________________
Magic is the optical illusion made to entertain people. It is just as my career has shown me. You see, I am a magician performer. I do magic in the streets, at birthday parties, and all sorts of gatherings- that kind of gig.
To the supernaturalist, magic is the power to wield supernatural forces to interfere with nature. Since Matt was a kid, he has always dreamt to throw fireballs, turn invisible, then flying using his thoughts as fuel. Alas, what has growth done to him?
Aside from breaking his dreams, separating him from his family, and throwing him into poverty- growth's only redeeming quality is it thought Matt romance...
Cringe but true.
"Hey, Matt. Look what I got here, a magic book! Wanna learn?" Len teasingly said.
Hmmm... Magic huh? Different from a broken dream, I pursued magic as a career interest. Maybe, the dream can still be fixed.
Follow Matt as he rediscovers his broken dreams, endure time, and learn his ideal magic— the starting point of his ascent to the magical peak! See the small-time magician become a magus feared by many.
_______________________________________________________________________
Meanwhile, this is the best I can do...
What is the strongest magic out there?
It's Zeal.
Define magic. I do magic in the streets, at birthday parties, and all sorts of gatherings- that kind of gig. To the traditionalists, magic is the power to wield supernatural forces, to interfere with nature. «Look what I got here, a magic book! Wanna learn?» Len teasingly said.
Different from a broken dream, I pursued magic as a career interest.
_______________________________________________________________________
I am also having a problem with which title sounds better, Z. Mage or Everlasting Mage?
This was my first work, it reeks of my noob side as a writer. But the story is good, just my storytelling technique at that time is horrendously terrible. Some comments motivated me to fix it, to serve it justice. This is my first work, and it meant a lot to me, especially the magic system.
