Looking for some feedback on my Treemen Story.

Jayrayme6

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I'm looking for some native English speaker's help to edit my story's grammar and style.

English isn't my native language and this story is a translation from French.

I feel that unfortunately a lot of quality was lost in translation.

Therefore, I'm looking for feedback on how to improve it.

The story to review is included in my signature.

I'm open to the idea of including your name on the story's cover if you help me to edit it.

We could even negotiate a partnership.
 
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