Looking for some feedback and critiques

Sayamarey

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Hey everyone, my name is Derek Yang, A.K.A. Sayamarey. I'm an aspiring author, and my series, The Ascended: Welcome to Syrova, is my first genuine attempt at actually writing. It's a dark fantasy, erotic romance, isekai Gamelit about a retired veteran whose life is upended when the System of Cultivation arrives on Earth.

I'd appreciate any feedback and constructive criticism from all of you.


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