Tsuru-gordom-ramsay-lazyreviewer here (don't be offended by what i say, just pure neutral review)
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Hm....
I glimpsed through your first chap1 of "I refused to be reincarnated"
In a good and bad (at same time) point, your writing is very "young". (the style, the words choices, etc)
By that, your writing seems very amateur, and seems like straight from the imagination of a child that dreamed/phantasmed of it during class/break/free-time.
BUT !!!!!!! that also means, there is the positive part : unlike a well-written one, full of details, and chosen carefully of which the author probably learned from other people tips/advices/other books, its easy to feel the EXPLODING IMAGINATION that can only come from purity of the innocent of the young. Which sadly often escape people when they grow up.
(ofc in lot of cases, like me for example, i keep my childishness + imagination despite not ultra young anymore / not that old)
One thing i can recommend you though, which i am not sure would help you or do an adverse effect,
is try to not simply write "1 line sentence" and "jump to next line (ENTER KEY)"
To better explain, look at first chap of "Refused" and your 2nd "Imp" series
2nd series, seems more pleasing to the eyes, when there was the BIG STATUS data. and/or had some small paragraphs.
vs 1st series, 1 sentence, next line, 1 sentence, next line. Its like written in a diary / memo of someone.
I said this but dont force yourself if you can't/dont like it. Also i'm NOT saying to write BIG 4+ lines paragraphs but to at least try to not write 1 lines and jumping. The big empty spaces is sometimes problematic for human brains.
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The quality is very GOOD though. (unlike some other people asking for reviews [if you check them on SHF, you would see i was very harsh to them])
Continue like that.
Also dont be sad for no comments. Its 2024. People disliked commenting before, but now its ultra low rate of happening.
And your numbers (viewers/favorites) are also promising.
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Another point :
Try to read some JP or CN novels.
And change your chaps titles to be more like them, (but again, not asking for you to write a 200 words-long chapter title, but to atleast make them memorable AND easier to identify)
+ dont forget to add "numbering": [Ch1 : The start of a gamer's infernal journey]
+ don't release all at once (even if like some other authors said : i simply want to share it with others fast and i got a stockpile of chapters)
if too much at once, its like asurascans translator releases, people wont comment and simply bing it all, and comment on latest chap. (i speak from experience)
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Bonus : Also you got like 4.3/5 score (of 6 reviews)
I think its indicative enough you are good enough ^_^b
(now you just need to stick to it, and cross fingers/hope the algorythm of SH will put it in front page in "Trending" / you will then get a SMALL BUNCH of readers trying it)
(also some decent authors were also clueless how they appeared to front page lol but were happy by the small spike of readers, anyway just have patience. Just don't drop halfway nor lose motivation like lot of authors did.)
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Bonus 2 : You could also add a small note at end of next chap : "Please comment, i would love some feedback" (if you are desperate) (or want to communicate with your readers)
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