Looking for Honest Feedback on My Story

[Lilias]

Hi everyone,

I’m looking for some honest feedback from other authors. I’ve been working on a story and would really like to know what you think about it.

Things I’d especially like feedback on:

* Plot and pacing
* Character development
* Overall readability

Feel free to be honest. Constructive criticism is very welcome.

Story link:
[https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...ends-i-became-the-strongest-lord-by-accident/]

Thank you in advance!

 

[Eldoria]

Put your thread in the feedback section so that other authors can easily find your thread and maybe give a review.