Looking for honest feedback on my novel. (LitRPG)

TheSystemlessOne

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I’m genuinely looking for honest feedback on my novel. I’ve already uploaded around 55k words but I still can’t tell whether it’s good or needs improvement. Most readers don’t really express their thoughts and writing without feedback's feel a bit underwhelming.

I’ve also tried asking for feedback on different platforms like Royal Road but since this is my first original fiction, it feels like people are a bit hesitant to speak up.

If you’ve been reading, I’d truly appreciate any thoughts: good or bad. Even a few lines would help a lot. Here's my link—
 
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