Looking for Honest Feedback – Cross World Villain’s Love

[Lazim]

Hey everyone! I recently uploaded Volume 1 of my novel, Cross World Villain’s Love, here on Scribble Hub. It’s a fantasy-drama with romance, loss, and a darker villainous journey.


I’d appreciate honest feedback on the pacing, characters, or anything that feels off. I’m trying to improve and grow as a writer, so your thoughts mean a lot. ?


Here’s the link if you’re interested:
My novel link.


Thanks in advance!

 

[Eldoria]

From your synopsis, your story appears to fall into the dark fantasy genre with elements of tragic romance. How about swaping reviews with me? My novel is also a dark fantasy with elements of motherhood. If you agree, we can review the prologue and one chapter to assess the novel's strengths and weaknesses narratively. We can position ourselves as readers, enjoying the story, rather than as authors.

My work: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/...ts-to-live-in-peace-with-her-little-daughter/

 

[Humanistheart]

The synopsis was mildly interesting, although you might want edit the obvious chat gpt parts. I liked the mysterious taxi driver. But in the end it sounds like just another generic iseki (sp?) story. I can't slog my way through another one of those. Sry bud. I wish you luck.