Looking for help to improve my French to English Translation.

Jayrayme6

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I've recently started to translate the second version of my novel, the Mad King of the Treeman.

I'm looking for a native english speaker's pair of eyes to improve the translation's quality.
I already worked a lot on the worldbuilding component/scenes cutting component before writing this version.

Story is in my signature below.
 
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