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The Royal Princess is a Sadist
The premise in a nutshell:
A certain princess indulges in the pleasure of sadism to fulfill her twisted desires, and in its own somewhat twisted and ironic way, for the good of others.
It's really quite self explanatory. I'd just like some first impressions on this story, and also want a few tips on what I should do for the perspective.
A few options I've come up with are these (but I'm open for more):
1. Keep the perspective the exact same
2. 1st person POV for MC (present tense)
3. 1st person POV for MC (past tense)
The premise in a nutshell:
A certain princess indulges in the pleasure of sadism to fulfill her twisted desires, and in its own somewhat twisted and ironic way, for the good of others.
It's really quite self explanatory. I'd just like some first impressions on this story, and also want a few tips on what I should do for the perspective.
A few options I've come up with are these (but I'm open for more):
1. Keep the perspective the exact same
2. 1st person POV for MC (present tense)
3. 1st person POV for MC (past tense)